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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #34495 Crime
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Nowadays involvement of youth in crimes has increased at an alarming rate. Discuss your opinion.

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Nowadays involvement of youth in crimes has increased at an alarming rate. Discuss your opinion.
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Reports that the involvement of youth in crime has increased at an alarming rate have become common, and in my opinion, this rise in juvenile offences is real yet largely social in origin.

Firstly, one major factor behind youth crime is persistent economic disadvantage that pushes young people toward illegal activity at a growing rate. Moreover, when teenagers face unemployment and underfunded schools, some youngsters view crime as the only accessible path to income or status. For example, petty theft or drug dealing can seem normal to a youth in neighbourhoods where lawful work is scarce, which lifts the local crime rate. In addition, poverty, family breakdown, and peer influence all raise the involvement of juveniles in offences that damage the wider community.

However, another important cause of youth crime is the erosion of the guidance structures that once regulated teenage behaviour. Furthermore, reduced parental supervision and heavy exposure to violent online content can lower inhibitions, blurring the moral boundaries that keep youngsters away from violence. Admittedly, stricter policing and law enforcement are often proposed to cut the juvenile crime rate, yet punishment alone rarely addresses the roots of offences. Nevertheless, prevention through mentoring and engaging education steers many teenagers away from crime far more effectively than harsh reform or detention. Consequently, tackling the involvement of youth in crime demands that society rebuild supportive family, school, and community systems for its young people. Therefore, the alarming rise in juvenile offences should be read as a social warning rather than proof of moral decline among the youth.

Ultimately, addressing inequality and restoring guidance can reduce youth crime sustainably and protect vulnerable teenagers from a life of violence.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion in "this rise in juvenile offences is real yet largely social in origin" and supports it with the example "petty theft or drug dealing can seem normal to a youth". this rise in juvenile offences is real yet largely social in originpetty theft or drug dealing can seem normal to a youth
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses many linking words to sequence ideas, such as "Firstly", "Moreover", "However", and "Consequently". They guide the reader smoothly. FirstlyMoreoverHoweverNeverthelessConsequently
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer builds long, controlled sentences. The clause "when teenagers face unemployment and underfunded schools" shows good use of subordinate structures. when teenagers face unemployment and underfunded schoolsthe erosion of the guidance structures that once regulated teenage behaviour
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence "punishment alone rarely addresses the roots of offences" is accurate and reads naturally. punishment alone rarely addresses the roots of offences
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and collocations like "persistent economic disadvantage" and "reduced parental supervision". persistent economic disadvantagereduced parental supervisionfamily breakdown, and peer influence
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British forms "neighbourhoods" and "behaviour". neighbourhoodsbehaviour
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 276 words and is a clear multi-paragraph essay with an introduction, developed body, and a conclusion.
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