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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33674 Success
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“Success is only due to hard work. Luck does not make a person successful or unsuccessful.” Do you agree or disagree with that opinion? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer.

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“Success is only due to hard work. Luck does not make a person successful or unsuccessful.” Do you agree or disagree with that opinion? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer.
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Many people argue that success results purely from hard work, dismissing luck as a decisive factor. In my opinion, I largely disagree with this specific view about success. Although hard work is essential for genuine achievement, luck significantly shapes career opportunities and personal outcomes. This essay presents reasons and examples showing that success emerges from both effort and favourable external circumstances.

Firstly, luck grants access to opportunities that hard work alone cannot create for any person. For example, talented graduates who work hard still depend on meeting supportive mentors, and such fortune amplifies their effort into visible achievement. Furthermore, external factors like environment, education, resources, and network shape whether personal effort truly leads to success.

Admittedly, hard work builds skill, talent, determination, perseverance, and motivation that raise the probability of career success. However, ignoring luck overlooks how uncontrollable circumstances and chance shape a person's ultimate achievement. For instance, athletes who work extremely hard face injuries and judging decisions that determine whether their effort yields success or failure. Consequently, this debate about hard work and luck reveals that success also depends on timing and privilege. Moreover, overcoming challenges and turning failure into learning and growth requires favourable luck alongside sustained effort. Therefore, a healthy attitude, self-belief, and confidence prepare a person to seize a lucky opportunity when it arises.

In conclusion, hard work forms the foundation of success, yet luck converts genuine effort into real achievement and career goal. Ultimately, twenty-first century stakeholders should recognise that both hard work and luck jointly make a person successful.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion and supports it with a real example. The view is that both effort and luck matter, shown with graduates and athletes. luck significantly shapes career opportunities and personal outcomesathletes who work extremely hard face injuries and judging decisions
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itMany linking words open the sentences and keep the ideas in order. They connect each point smoothly. FirstlyFurthermoreAdmittedlyHoweverIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long sentences with joined clauses that stay clear. These show good control of complex language. Although hard work is essential for genuine achievementhow uncontrollable circumstances and chance shape a person's ultimate achievement
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis long sentence with linked clauses is built correctly and reads well. The grammar stays under full control. talented graduates who work hard still depend on meeting supportive mentors
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and natural word pairs. These fit the success topic well. favourable external circumstancescareer successtiming and privilegeself-belief, and confidence
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct all through the essay. These two words are good examples. perseverancefavourable
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 255 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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