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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33495 obesity
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Now a days, most people are facing obesity. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions or measures should be taken to eradicate the problem?

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Now a days, most people are facing obesity. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions or measures should be taken to eradicate the problem?
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Obesity has become increasingly prevalent in many societies, creating serious challenges for public health and economic productivity. This pattern is not random but closely linked to contemporary living conditions and social norms. In my view, rising obesity is mainly caused by lifestyle structures rather than personal failure, and it can only be reduced through aligned preventive and remedial action.

A primary cause is the widespread combination of sedentary behaviour and high-calorie consumption. Many people spend long hours in office-based employment, commuting, or using digital media, which significantly limits physical movement. At the same time, processed foods are affordable, readily available, and heavily promoted. Frequent dependence on takeaway meals and sugary beverages results in a sustained energy surplus that gradually leads to weight gain and related health disorders.

A further cause lies in inadequate health education and poorly planned urban environments. Individuals often lack practical understanding of nutrition, portion sizes, and long-term consequences, while cities may discourage walking or cycling due to unsafe or inconvenient infrastructure. Effective solutions therefore require government intervention, including clearer nutritional labelling, compulsory physical education in schools, and greater investment in accessible public spaces that support active lifestyles.

In conclusion, tackling obesity requires long-term prevention rather than temporary remedies. Governments, educational institutions, and employers must promote healthier choices, while individuals should be guided rather than criticised. By reshaping food systems and daily routines, societies can reduce obesity rates and safeguard future healthcare capacity.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear view on the cause and supports it with detail. The cause is lifestyle, shown with sedentary work and food. rising obesity is mainly caused by lifestyle structures rather than personal failureprocessed foods are affordable, readily available, and heavily promoted
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open the sentences and order the ideas well. They guide the reader through causes and solutions. At the same timeA further causewhileEffective solutions thereforeIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long sentences with joined clauses that stay clear. These show good control of complex language. which significantly limits physical movementwhile cities may discourage walking or cycling due to unsafe or inconvenient infrastructure
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis long cause sentence with linked clauses is built correctly and reads well. The grammar stays under full control. Frequent dependence on takeaway meals and sugary beverages results in a sustained energy surplus
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and natural word pairs. These fit the health topic well. public healthsedentary behaviournutritional labellingactive lifestyles
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout the essay. These two words are good examples. prevalentbeverages
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 236 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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