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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33492 customs
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Some people think that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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International travel increasingly brings diverse cultures into close contact, raising questions about appropriate behaviour abroad. One view holds that visitors ought to adjust to local customs, whereas another emphasises acceptance of difference by host societies. I contend that travellers should respect core local norms, but this should coexist with tolerance for harmless cultural diversity.

Supporters of adaptation prioritise social harmony and legal clarity. When visitors observe dress codes, etiquette, and public regulations, misunderstandings diminish and communities feel acknowledged rather than challenged. For example, travellers who behave appropriately in religious sites help to prevent offence and unnecessary tension. Such considerations also protect visitors from penalties, enabling smoother interaction and supporting sustainable tourism.

Conversely, others argue that host countries should welcome cultural differences to promote inclusion and mutual learning. Excessively rigid expectations can exclude minorities and suppress identity, particularly in global cities shaped by migration and tourism. Allowing varied greetings, eating habits, or clothing styles can enrich social life and encourage openness. In my view, flexibility is justified when behaviour does not undermine safety, individual rights, or essential civic values.

In conclusion, neither strict conformity nor unrestricted difference is effective. Visitors should make genuine efforts to respect local customs, while host societies should accept diversity that causes no harm. This balanced approach reduces conflict and enables cultural exchange to flourish in an interconnected world.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a balanced opinion and supports it with a real example. The view is stated clearly and shown with a travel example. travellers should respect core local normstravellers who behave appropriately in religious sites help to prevent offence
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open the sentences and keep the ideas in order. They guide the reader through both views. whereasFor exampleConverselyIn my viewIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long sentences with joined clauses that stay clear. These show good control of complex language. When visitors observe dress codes, etiquette, and public regulationsflexibility is justified when behaviour does not undermine safety
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence with a time clause is built correctly and reads smoothly. The grammar stays under full control. Excessively rigid expectations can exclude minorities and suppress identity
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and natural word pairs. These fit travel and culture writing well. social harmonymutual learningsustainable tourismcultural exchange
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct all through the essay. These two words are good examples. emphasisesunnecessary
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 222 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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