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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33289 Sports and games
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Sports and games create disturbance in students’ life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Sports and games create disturbance in students’ life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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It is often argued that participation in sports and games disrupts students' academic lives by reducing concentration on studies. I largely disagree with this view. When organised appropriately, physical activities enhance cognitive focus, discipline, and overall academic performance rather than undermining it.

The strongest reason is that sports improve mental health and concentration, which are essential for effective learning. Regular physical exercise reduces stress, anxiety, and fatigue, allowing students to engage more attentively with academic tasks. For example, students who play team sports often return to classrooms with improved alertness and motivation, leading to better comprehension and memory retention. Consequently, sports function as a productive break that refreshes the mind, instead of a distraction that fragments attention.

Admittedly, excessive involvement in games can interfere with study time if poorly managed. However, this problem arises from weak time management rather than from sports themselves. Schools that integrate structured training schedules and academic expectations demonstrate that students can balance both commitments successfully. Moreover, sports cultivate transferable skills such as self-discipline, goal setting, and perseverance, which directly support sustained academic effort and concentration.

In conclusion, sports and games do not inherently disturb students' studies. On the contrary, when balanced with academic responsibilities, they strengthen concentration, emotional well-being, and learning capacity. Therefore, I disagree with the claim to a large extent, as the benefits of sports clearly outweigh the potential risks.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion in their own words and supports it with a specific example. The point about team sports develops the argument convincingly. I largely disagree with this viewstudents who play team sports often return to classrooms with improved alertness
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay flows logically and uses clear linking words. These devices connect the points smoothly. For exampleConsequentlyAdmittedlyHoweverIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease, including a conditional clause and a relative clause. Meaning is completely clear. excessive involvement in games can interfere with study time if poorly managedwhich are essential for effective learning
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is used with full control. This participle construction is accurate. allowing students to engage more attentively with academic tasks
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay shows a broad lexical range with strong collocations. These academic phrases are used precisely. cognitive focusmemory retentiontransferable skillssustained academic effort
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout. These words are written without error. concentrationperseverance
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 227 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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