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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33284 Internet change
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Does the advent of Internet change the role of teacher? To what extent do you agree?

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Does the advent of Internet change the role of teacher? To what extent do you agree?
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The rapid expansion of the Internet has transformed access to information and reshaped educational environments worldwide. I strongly agree that this development has changed the role of the teacher to a large extent, although it has not reduced the importance of educators. Instead, teaching responsibilities have shifted from direct knowledge transmission to the facilitation of effective learning.

The most significant change is that teachers are no longer the sole or primary source of information. Students can independently access online lectures, digital libraries and interactive platforms at any time. Consequently, teachers increasingly function as guides who help learners evaluate information, develop critical thinking skills and apply knowledge appropriately. For instance, during research-based assignments, teachers now prioritise training students to judge the credibility of online sources rather than merely supplying factual content, which enhances academic reasoning.

However, some argue that the Internet weakens teachers' influence by encouraging self-directed learning. While this argument has some validity, it underestimates the growing need for professional guidance. Without structured support, students may feel overwhelmed by excessive information or misled by inaccurate material. Teachers therefore remain essential in organising learning tasks, sustaining motivation and promoting meaningful collaboration, particularly within blended or fully online classrooms.

In conclusion, the Internet has clearly reshaped the role of the teacher, moving it from instructor to facilitator and mentor. Although technology broadens educational opportunities, effective learning still relies on teachers who can guide, provide context and inspire students in an increasingly digital age.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion in the writer's own words and backs it with a real example. The thesis and the example about judging sources show depth. I strongly agree that this development has changed the role of the teacher to a large extentteachers now prioritise training students to judge the credibility of online sources
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas flow well and each paragraph starts with a clear linking word. These connectors guide the reader from one point to the next. InsteadConsequentlyHoweverIn conclusionWhile this argument has some validity
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease, including a relative clause and a concessive clause. Meaning stays clear throughout. teachers increasingly function as guides who help learners evaluate informationAlthough technology broadens educational opportunities, effective learning still relies on teachers
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex structures are controlled and correct. This sentence handles a long verb phrase without any error. it underestimates the growing need for professional guidance
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong collocations. Words like these show a broad and accurate vocabulary. direct knowledge transmissionthe facilitation of effective learningdevelop critical thinking skillssustaining motivation
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British form. These words are written accurately. prioritisecredibility
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 241 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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