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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33283 air travel
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Some people think air travel has more negative impacts than positive impacts on modern life. What do you think?

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Some people think air travel has more negative impacts than positive impacts on modern life. What do you think?
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Air travel is frequently criticised for environmental harm and social disruption, yet it has become an essential feature of contemporary societies. In my view, although aviation generates serious costs, its overall contribution to modern life remains more positive than negative because it enables economic integration, rapid exchange, and effective responses to global challenges.

One major benefit of air travel is its role in supporting global economic activity and employment. Fast and reliable flights allow businesses to align international supply chains, expand markets, and attract investment, which sustains long-term growth. Tourism-dependent regions, in particular, rely on aviation to generate income, improve infrastructure, and reduce regional inequality. Without efficient air links, many peripheral economies would struggle to participate meaningfully in global commerce.

Critics argue that aviation worsens climate change and increases noise and congestion, and these concerns cannot be ignored. However, such impacts are increasingly addressed through fuel-efficient aircraft, improved air traffic management, and sustained investment in sustainable aviation fuels. Compared with the social and economic isolation that would result from severely restricting flights, policies designed to manage reform represent a more rational and proportionate response.

In conclusion, air travel imposes real environmental and social costs, but its advantages for connectivity, prosperity, and international collaboration are greater. Rather than viewing aviation as a net harm, governments should maximise its benefits while reducing damage through regulation and innovation. This balanced approach best serves the needs of modern life.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear view that air travel is more positive than negative. The point about supply chains gives strong support. its overall contribution to modern life remains more positive than negativealign international supply chains, expand markets, and attract investment
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer connects ideas and both sides with clear linking words. The devices below show smooth flow. One major benefitCritics argue that aviation worsens climate changeHowever, such impacts are increasingly addressedIn conclusion, air travel imposes real environmental and social costs
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with reason and comparison clauses that read with ease. The examples below show this. because it enables economic integrationCompared with the social and economic isolation that would result
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe writer controls complex grammar cleanly. The relative clause below is joined correctly. that would result from severely restricting flights
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise words and natural collocations. The phrases below show a wide word range. economic integrationsupply chainsregional inequalityglobal commerce
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly and the writer uses the British form below. This shows accurate spelling. criticisedproportionate
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 235 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 limit. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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