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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33279 Company products
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There are both advantage and disadvantage of company workers accessing their own products and services. Discuss.

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There are both advantage and disadvantage of company workers accessing their own products and services. Discuss.
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Allowing employees to access their own company's products and services is a common organisational practice with mixed consequences. While such access can strengthen performance and loyalty, it also creates risks related to cost, fairness, and misuse. Overall, the advantages are significant but only when clear boundaries are enforced.

One major advantage is improved product knowledge and service quality. When workers regularly use what their organisation provides, they gain practical insight into strengths, limitations, and customer experience. This enables more accurate communication with clients and faster problem-solving. For example, staff in a technology firm who use internal software daily are better equipped to explain features and suggest realistic improvements. In addition, discounted or free access often increases job satisfaction and commitment, as employees feel trusted and valued by the organisation.

However, unrestricted access can generate serious disadvantages. Financial costs may rise if benefits are overused or treated as entitlements rather than incentives. There is also a risk of unequal access between departments, which can damage workplace morale. In some cases, employees may exploit internal privileges for personal gain, such as reselling products or sharing services with non-employees, undermining ethical standards and brand reputation.

In conclusion, employee access to company products and services offers clear benefits in expertise, motivation, and organisational alignment. Nevertheless, these gains outweigh the disadvantages only when access is carefully regulated through transparent policies, usage limits, and accountability mechanisms.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay weighs both sides and gives a clear view that advantages need clear limits. The software staff example gives strong support. the advantages are significant but only when clear boundaries are enforcedstaff in a technology firm who use internal software daily
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer connects ideas and both sides with clear linking words. The devices below show a logical order. One major advantageFor example, staff in a technology firmIn addition, discounted or free accessHowever, unrestricted accessIn conclusion, employee access
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with time and relative clauses that read with ease. The examples below show this. When workers regularly use what their organisation provideswhich can damage workplace morale
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe writer controls complex grammar cleanly. The condition clause below is joined correctly. only when access is carefully regulated
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise words and natural collocations. The phrases below show a rich word range. product knowledgejob satisfactionbrand reputationaccountability mechanisms
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including longer ones. The words below show accurate spelling. entitlementsprivileges
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 230 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 limit. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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