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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33271 POOR LIFESTYLE
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What are the problems of leading a poor lifestyle? What can be done to prevent this?

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What are the problems of leading a poor lifestyle? What can be done to prevent this?
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A poor lifestyle, marked by an unhealthy diet and physical inactivity and unstable routines, creates persistent problems for individuals and wider societies. Such a lifestyle undermines physical health and mental wellbeing as well as economic participation. This essay argues that the problems are serious but largely preventable, and that prevention depends on aligned personal choices and effective public solutions.

Firstly, one major problem is deteriorating health, since poor nutrition and sedentary habits increase obesity and diabetes and cardiovascular disease. Consequently, these health conditions reduce productivity and raise medical expenditure, a problem that traps households in long-term financial strain. Moreover, an irregular lifestyle with poor sleep and chronic stress weakens concentration and emotional regulation, which can worsen anxiety and depression. For instance, employees with erratic daily habits often suffer burnout, a problem that limits career development and damages health.

Secondly, effective prevention requires both individual responsibility and structural solutions. In particular, individuals can adopt a balanced lifestyle through better diet and regular exercise and consistent sleep habits, which improve health and psychological resilience. Furthermore, governments can support prevention by expanding access to affordable nutritious food and safe public spaces and clear workplace health standards. Therefore, when employers promote flexible scheduling and health education, healthier habits become a sustainable solution rather than an exception.

In conclusion, a poor lifestyle damages physical health and mental stability, creating enduring social problems. Nevertheless, these outcomes are not inevitable, because prevention works. Ultimately, through informed personal habits reinforced by targeted public solutions, societies can reduce preventable illness and enable people to lead a productive and balanced lifestyle.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay answers the whole prompt and gives a clear opinion in the phrase about problems being serious but preventable. It also adds real support like the burnout example. the problems are serious but largely preventableemployees with erratic daily habits often suffer burnout
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itEach paragraph starts with a clear linking word so the ideas flow in order. The words below guide the reader step by step. Firstly, one major problemConsequently, these health conditionsMoreover, an irregular lifestyleSecondly, effective preventionTherefore, when employersIn conclusion, a poor lifestyle
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses longer sentences with joined clauses that stay clear and correct. The reason clause below shows this control. since poor nutrition and sedentary habits increase obesitywhich can worsen anxiety and depression
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe essay handles complex sentences well. The time clause below is joined correctly with no errors. when employers promote flexible scheduling and health education
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer picks precise academic words and natural word pairs. The phrases below show a broad word range. sedentary habitsmedical expenditurepsychological resilienceemotional regulation
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including longer ones. The words below are examples of accurate spelling. cardiovascularconcentration
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 261 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 limit. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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