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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
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In several societies, rising average body mass alongside declining health and fitness has become a visible public concern. Indeed, research suggests that this trend reflects structural changes in daily life rather than individual weakness alone. The principal causes are generally sedentary routines and food environments that promote unhealthy consumption, and effective solutions clearly require aligned action from governments, institutions, and citizens.

First, a major cause is the dominance of inactive lifestyles shaped by technology and urban design. Specifically, many jobs involve prolonged screen-based work, while car-dependent commuting often reduces everyday movement. Moreover, inexpensive processed foods are aggressively marketed and readily available, thereby encouraging excessive calorie intake and gradually undermining nutritional quality.

Second, addressing these problems undoubtedly requires both policy intervention and sustained behavioural change. For instance, governments can regulate food advertising, strengthen clear nutritional labelling, and plan cities that prioritise walking, cycling, and accessible recreation spaces. Furthermore, employers and schools should support regular exercise and balanced meals, while public education likely helps people build realistic, long-term habits instead of relying on short-term dieting.

In conclusion, rising body weight and declining fitness largely stem from inactive routines and unhealthy food systems. Therefore, meaningful improvement depends on reshaping the environments that guide everyday choices. Overall, I believe that when supportive public policies align with personal responsibility, societies are more likely to achieve healthier populations, stronger fitness levels, and considerably lower long-term health risks.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay names clear causes and clear solutions in depth. Concrete examples like food advertising rules support it. The principal causes are generally sedentary routines and food environments that promote unhealthy consumptiongovernments can regulate food advertising, strengthen clear nutritional labelling
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay follows a neat cause-then-solution plan. Linking words open each paragraph and idea. FirstSpecificallyMoreoverSecondFurthermoreIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with relative clauses and reason clauses smoothly. shaped by technology and urban designthereby encouraging excessive calorie intake and gradually undermining nutritional quality
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence contrasts two ideas correctly with clear structure. The grammar stays controlled. many jobs involve prolonged screen-based work, while car-dependent commuting often reduces everyday movement
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise academic words and health collocations. sedentary routinesinexpensive processed foodsnutritional qualitybehavioural change
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including recreation. recreationconsiderably
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 231 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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