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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #33092 petrol
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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Rising congestion and urban pollution have prompted proposals to raise petrol prices as a deterrent to car use. While higher fuel costs may influence travel behaviour, I largely disagree that this is the best solution, because its effects are uneven and insufficient without complementary measures that reshape transport systems.

Price signals reduce discretionary driving by increasing the marginal cost of each journey, encouraging carpooling or a shift towards public transport. For instance, commuters might consolidate errands or choose buses when fuel becomes expensive, which lowers traffic volumes and emissions in the short term. This approach is administratively simple and generates public revenue that could support environmental initiatives.

However, petrol price rises disproportionately burden low-income and peripheral residents who lack viable alternatives, whereas wealthier drivers often absorb the extra cost and continue driving. Moreover, congestion is shaped by land use patterns, road capacity, and service quality, so fuel pricing alone fails to resolve peak-hour bottlenecks or highly polluting vehicle fleets. Targeted policies such as congestion charging, sustained investment in reliable public transport, and stricter emission standards more directly alter travel choices and technology, delivering durable reductions.

Overall, increasing petrol prices contributes to addressing traffic and pollution, but it is not the most effective or equitable primary tool. A balanced strategy that prioritises transport alternatives and targeted regulation, with fuel pricing as a supportive measure, is far more likely to achieve lasting urban improvements.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear position and explains it in depth. A commuter example supports the argument well. I largely disagree that this is the best solutioncommuters might consolidate errands or choose buses when fuel becomes expensive
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised with a clear conclusion. Linking words move the reader through each idea. For instanceHoweverMoreoverOverall
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with contrast and reason clauses with ease. whereas wealthier drivers often absorb the extra cost and continue drivingbecause its effects are uneven and insufficient without complementary measures
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence links several causes correctly with clear structure. The grammar is accurate. congestion is shaped by land use patterns, road capacity, and service quality
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise policy vocabulary and strong collocations. discretionary drivingcongestion chargingemission standardspeak-hour bottlenecks
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including prioritises. prioritisesequitable
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 232 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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