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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #32988 15. Working employees
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Working employees have paid leave. Is it good or bad?

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Working employees have paid leave. Is it good or bad?
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Paid leave for employees is a common feature of modern labour markets, yet its value is often questioned. I argue that providing paid time off is beneficial overall because it protects worker wellbeing and ultimately improves organisational performance, despite short-term costs for employers.

The strongest advantage of paid leave is its impact on physical and mental health. Regular breaks reduce burnout, allow recovery from illness, and support family responsibilities, which leads to higher motivation and sustained concentration at work. For example, employees who can rest adequately are less likely to make errors and more capable of creative problem-solving.

Critics argue that paid leave is costly and disrupts productivity, especially for small businesses. However, this view ignores turnover and absenteeism costs created by overworked staff. When employees feel trusted and valued, retention improves and recruitment expenses fall, meaning paid leave can be economically rational rather than a burden.

Overall, paid leave should be seen as an investment rather than a concession. By safeguarding health and encouraging long-term commitment, it enhances productivity and organisational stability. While careful scheduling is required, the benefits to employees and employers outweigh the drawbacks, making paid leave a positive and necessary feature of contemporary employment. This approach supports sustainable work cultures in competitive economies.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion and supports it well. A concrete example about rested employees backs the main point. providing paid time off is beneficial overall because it protects worker wellbeing and ultimately improves organisational performanceemployees who can rest adequately are less likely to make errors
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe argument flows in a logical order with a clear plan. Linking words guide the reader through each stage. For exampleHowevermeaningOverallWhile
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer builds complex sentences with subordinate clauses and shows a concession clearly. When employees feel trusted and valued, retention improvesdespite short-term costs for employers
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence lists ideas and links a result correctly. The grammar stays under control. Regular breaks reduce burnout, allow recovery from illness, and support family responsibilities
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses strong academic words and workplace collocations with ease. worker wellbeingturnover and absenteeism costsrecruitment expensesorganisational stability
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British forms labour and organisational. labourorganisational
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 207 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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