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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #32966 8. humanities
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Some say that in today’s world the value of humanities has been eclipsed by the necessity of preparing for specific wealth-producing careers, such as medicine. What is your opinion about a role in today’s changing world for study of the humanities?

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Some say that in today’s world the value of humanities has been eclipsed by the necessity of preparing for specific wealth-producing careers, such as medicine. What is your opinion about a role in today’s changing world for study of the humanities?
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In an economy increasingly shaped by specialised professions, the study of humanities is often portrayed as secondary to wealth-producing careers such as medicine. I contend that this view is short-sighted, because humanities retain a crucial role in preparing individuals for a volatile, ethically complex world, even while vocational training remains necessary.

First, humanities cultivate transferable skills that technical education alone rarely develops to the same depth. Critical analysis, persuasive communication, and historical awareness enable graduates to interpret uncertainty, collaborate across cultures, and adapt when industries change. For example, doctors who have studied ethics and literature are better equipped to communicate with patients, weigh moral dilemmas, and exercise reflective judgement.

Admittedly, societies need professionals with concrete expertise to sustain economic growth and public welfare. However, without the humanistic perspective, innovation can become narrow and socially detached, producing efficiency without wisdom. The humanities challenge assumptions, question power, and provide cultural context, which helps ensure that scientific and commercial advances serve human needs rather than merely financial metrics.

In conclusion, preparing for specific careers is essential, but it should not eclipse the humanities. Their contribution lies in shaping adaptable, ethically responsible citizens who can integrate specialised knowledge with broader understanding. In a changing world defined by complexity rather than stability, this balance is not a luxury but a necessity.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer argues the humanities still matter and supports it with an example about doctors who study ethics. This answers the prompt in depth. humanities retain a crucial role in preparing individuals for a volatile, ethically complex worlddoctors who have studied ethics and literature are better equipped to communicate with patients
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe paragraphs open with clear signals and the ideas follow a logical order. These connectors link the argument smoothly. FirstFor exampleAdmittedlyHoweverIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses concessive and relative clauses with ease. This range keeps the meaning fully clear. even while vocational training remains necessarywhich helps ensure that scientific and commercial advances serve human needs
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe writer controls a complex sentence with a without-clause and correct forms. This shows strong grammar control. without the humanistic perspective, innovation can become narrow
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and good collocations. These show a broad lexical range. transferable skillspersuasive communicationreflective judgementcultural context
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including judgement and humanistic. This meets the correct spelling standard. judgementvocational
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 216 words, which is within the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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