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“In the future, people will work less hours at their jobs.” To what extent do you agree with it? Please support your opinion with your own experience.

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“In the future, people will work less hours at their jobs.” To what extent do you agree with it? Please support your opinion with your own experience.
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In many economies, technological progress and shifting social priorities are reshaping employment patterns. In my opinion, it is now widely predicted that people will work less in the future, and I largely agree with this view to a great extent. Rising productivity, flexible working models, and changing attitudes are reducing the need for long working weeks among employees across many sectors.

The main reason is that automation and digital tools now allow jobs and tasks to be completed with considerably less time and effort. Work that previously required sustained manual input from workers can now be performed quickly by software. In my own job, automated data processing has shortened reporting cycles, enabling my team to finish core employment duties sooner. As a result, standard hours have been informally reduced without harming output or service quality, which supports the argument that future people will regularly work fewer hours.

A further driver is the growing emphasis on work-life balance among employees and employers, motivated by concerns about stress and long-term health. Flexible arrangements such as remote work and compressed schedules are increasingly common in the present work environment. Although some sectors, including healthcare and emergency services, will still demand long shifts from workers and employees, career development policies in most industries favour reducing unnecessary hours.

In conclusion, shorter working hours will not apply universally, but average working time for people across employment sectors is likely to decline in the future. Technological efficiency and changing attitudes are steadily weakening the traditional long-hours culture.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer agrees that people will work fewer hours, then supports it with a real example from their own job. This gives strong, specific support. I largely agree with this view to a great extentautomated data processing has shortened reporting cycles, enabling my team to finish core employment duties sooner
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas flow well between paragraphs. The linking words below guide the reader through the two reasons and the ending. The main reasonAs a resultA further driverAlthough some sectorsIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease. The phrases below join ideas using contrast and add extra detail, and the meaning stays clear. Work that previously required sustained manual input from workers can now be performed quickly by softwareAlthough some sectors, including healthcare and emergency services, will still demand long shifts
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe grammar is accurate and controlled. This phrase shows a correct construction that adds a result to the main idea. without harming output or service quality
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses strong academic words and natural collocations. The phrases below are precise and fit the topic well. Rising productivityflexible working modelswork-life balancecompressed schedules
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout. Both words below are spelled well. automationefficiency
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 250 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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