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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #32040 Cities
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People are moving from rural areas to big cities. Is it good or bad?

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People are moving from rural areas to big cities. Is it good or bad?
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Large-scale movement from rural regions to major cities has become a defining social trend. While this shift creates pressure on urban systems and countryside communities, it is overall beneficial because cities concentrate opportunity, productivity and public services more efficiently. Therefore, rural-to-urban migration should be viewed as largely positive when it is managed responsibly and supported by effective policy.

First, large cities provide broader employment markets and higher earning potential, which can lift migrants out of poverty and increase national economic output. For instance, young adults relocating to metropolitan centres often gain skills, stable incomes and professional networks that are rarely available in agriculture-based regions. These individual improvements raise tax revenues, encourage entrepreneurship and stimulate innovation, generating benefits that extend beyond city boundaries to the wider economy.

Opponents argue that migration weakens rural communities and overwhelms urban infrastructure, resulting in congestion, housing shortages and social inequality. However, these challenges largely arise from inadequate planning rather than migration itself. They can be reduced through targeted investment in transport systems, affordable housing and balanced regional development. In addition, remittances and returning migrants can rejuvenate villages by funding education, healthcare and small enterprises.

In conclusion, population movement to large cities delivers substantial economic and social advantages that outweigh its disadvantages. By concentrating talent and services, urbanisation supports growth, mobility and modernisation. With policies that ease urban pressure and assist rural transitions, this demographic shift is clearly more good than bad.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion that moving to cities is overall good, then supports it with a real example about young adults. This gives strong, specific support. it is overall beneficial because cities concentrate opportunityyoung adults relocating to metropolitan centres often gain skills, stable incomes and professional networks
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas move smoothly through the essay. The linking words below guide the reader across the two sides and the ending. ThereforeFirstFor instanceHoweverIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease. The phrases below join ideas using contrast and condition, and the meaning stays clear. While this shift creates pressure on urban systemswhen it is managed responsibly and supported by effective policy
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe grammar is accurate and controlled. This phrase shows a correct construction that adds a result to the main idea. generating benefits that extend beyond city boundaries to the wider economy
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses strong academic words and natural collocations. The phrases below are precise and fit the topic well. higher earning potentialstimulate innovationurban infrastructurebalanced regional development
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including British forms. Both words below are spelled well. urbanisationrejuvenate
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 236 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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