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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31080 Advertising B2
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Advertising may make people buy something they don't need or cannot afford, but also, they can convey information to increase their life quality. What is your opinion?

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Advertising may make people buy something they don't need or cannot afford, but also, they can convey information to increase their life quality. What is your opinion?
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Advertising strongly shapes consumer behaviour across digital and traditional media. Although it is frequently criticised for persuading people to purchase products they neither need nor can afford, it also provides information that can improve everyday decisions. In my view, advertising is largely beneficial, as long as consumers think critically and appropriate regulation is enforced.

One major problem is that many advertisements rely on emotional appeal rather than careful reasoning. Constant exposure to advertising portraying unrealistic lifestyles and images of success can influence consumer psychology, generating artificial desires and social pressure to buy. This tendency is especially visible in promotions for luxury electronics or fashionable brands, where individuals may overspend to project status, resulting in debt, stress, and disappointment rather than lasting value.

Nevertheless, advertising also fulfils an important informative function that benefits consumers. Effective campaigns explain how products work, compare market prices, and introduce services that support health, learning, and sustainability. For instance, promotions for low-cost online courses or energy-efficient household appliances can help people develop skills, lower long-term expenses, and make informed choices that genuinely enhance quality of life.

In conclusion, advertising has the potential both to mislead and to educate. While it can persuade consumers towards unnecessary or unaffordable purchases, its role in disseminating practical and accessible information about products and services is significant. Consequently, when supported by consumer awareness and responsible oversight, advertising is more likely to raise living standards than to undermine them.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion that advertising is mostly helpful, and supports it with an example about online courses and appliances. advertising is largely beneficial, as long as consumers think criticallypromotions for low-cost online courses or energy-efficient household appliances
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay flows well with clear signposts that balance the two sides. One major problemNevertheless, advertising alsoFor instance, promotionsIn conclusion, advertising
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a concessive clause and a participle phrase smoothly, and the meaning stays clear. Although it is frequently criticised for persuading people to purchase productsgenerating artificial desires and social pressure to buy
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence handles a result idea and a comparison correctly. resulting in debt, stress, and disappointment rather than lasting value
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words that fit a discussion of advertising. consumer behaviouremotional appealresponsible oversightraise living standards
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly, including the British form. criticiseddisseminating
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 237 words and has a clear four-paragraph shape with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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