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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31078 Voting B2
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In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you believe with the notion of compulsory voting?

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In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you believe with the notion of compulsory voting?
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In several countries, voting is required by law rather than left entirely to personal choice, and I support this compulsory arrangement. Compulsory voting strengthens a democracy because it broadens participation and reduces the persistent inequality that damages fair elections. When turnout across a country is broad and predictable, its democracy reflects the preferences of ordinary citizens rather than those of a motivated minority.

The strongest argument for compulsory voting lies in its effect on the rights and representation of every citizen. Voluntary elections often see lower turnout among younger, poorer and less-educated citizens, which distorts how a democracy sets its priorities. Requiring citizens to vote, even under mild penalties, normalises voting as a civic duty and protects the political rights of the whole country. Consequently, the elected institutions of such countries gain greater legitimacy, because their democracy rests on genuinely universal voting.

Opponents argue that compulsory voting undermines the individual rights and freedoms that a democracy should defend. However, the obligation on citizens is limited, since no voter in these elections is forced to endorse any party or candidate. A blank ballot still lets citizens register dissatisfaction, so compulsory voting need not violate anyone's democratic rights. Moreover, higher turnout pressures parties across the country to explain their policies clearly, which improves the quality of every democracy. In many countries, this discipline has visibly raised trust in elections and deepened respect for voting itself.

Overall, compulsory voting offers democracies a practical way to strengthen the fairness and legitimacy of their elections. By broadening participation and protecting the rights of all citizens, compulsory voting helps a country align its government with public will. For these reasons, the benefits of compulsory voting clearly outweigh the minor inconvenience it places on individual citizens.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly supports compulsory voting and explains it with the example of low turnout among some groups. I support this compulsory arrangementVoluntary elections often see lower turnout among younger, poorer and less-educated citizens
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised with clear linkers that connect each argument. The strongest argumentConsequently, the elected institutionsOpponents argue thatHowever, the obligationMoreover, higher turnoutOverall, compulsory voting
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a cause clause and a concessive clause smoothly, and the meaning is clear. since no voter in these elections is forced to endorse any party or candidateeven under mild penalties, normalises voting as a civic duty
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence links a result and a cause correctly with clear control. because their democracy rests on genuinely universal voting
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words that fit a political topic. broadens participationgreater legitimacycivic dutyregister dissatisfaction
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly throughout the essay. legitimacyrepresentation
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 289 words and has a clear four-paragraph shape with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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