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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31056 Sports B2
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Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statement? Use your own examples to support.

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Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statement? Use your own examples to support.
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Hosting mega sporting events is often promoted as a catalyst for national development and global visibility. I largely agree that such tournaments can benefit host countries, but only when planning is disciplined and objectives are realistic. The gains are mainly indirect, arising from infrastructure upgrades, tourism exposure, and institutional learning rather than short-term profits.

First, large events can accelerate infrastructure investment that would otherwise be delayed. Transport networks, airports, and urban regeneration projects are often completed to fixed deadlines, improving long-term productivity. For example, improved public transport built for a World Cup can continue to reduce congestion and support daily commuting long after the final match.

However, critics argue that costs frequently exceed benefits, leaving public debt and unused venues. This risk is real, yet it reflects governance failures rather than an inherent flaw in hosting itself. When facilities are designed for post-event use and budgets are transparent, stadiums can serve community sport, concerts, and regional competitions instead of becoming liabilities.

Overall, hosting the Olympics or the World Cup can be beneficial to a considerable extent, but success is conditional rather than automatic. Countries that align the event with long-term urban and economic strategies are more likely to gain lasting value. Without such discipline, the promised benefits quickly dissipate.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer agrees that hosting events helps, but only with good planning, then supports it with an example. The transport example adds specific detail. I largely agree that such tournaments can benefit host countries, but only when planning is disciplinedimproved public transport built for a World Cup can continue to reduce congestion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised and flows smoothly. The linkers below open paragraphs and connect the two sides of the argument. FirstFor exampleHoweverOverallWithout such discipline
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with ease. The phrases below add condition and contrast and stay clear. that would otherwise be delayedyet it reflects governance failures rather than an inherent flaw in hosting itself
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe grammar is accurate and controlled. This phrase shows a correct clause built around a condition. When facilities are designed for post-event use and budgets are transparent
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise academic words and collocations. The terms below show a broad range. mega sporting eventsurban regeneration projectslong-term productivitytourism exposure
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly. Both words below are good examples. infrastructuredissipate
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 209 words, within the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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