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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #31052 Dangerous Activities
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Nowadays, more and more people engage in dangerous activities, such as skydiving and motorcycling. Are you in favour of them? Use examples to support your opinion.

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Nowadays, more and more people engage in dangerous activities, such as skydiving and motorcycling. Are you in favour of them? Use examples to support your opinion.
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Participation in high-risk pursuits has increased as people seek excitement beyond routine life. While such activities promise intense thrills, I am not broadly in favour of encouraging dangerous sports. The potential social and personal costs outweigh the private satisfaction they provide.

The strongest reason is the disproportionate risk to life and long-term health. Activities like skydiving or high-speed motorcycling expose participants to fatal accidents and permanent injury even when safety rules are followed. For example, a minor mechanical failure or sudden weather change can instantly turn recreation into tragedy. These outcomes also impose emotional and financial burdens on families and public health systems.

Supporters argue that calculated risk builds resilience, and personal freedom should be respected. However, this view underestimates the social responsibility attached to extreme risk-taking. When emergency services, insurance pools, and hospitals absorb the consequences, the choice is no longer purely individual. A safer alternative is to promote challenges through regulated adventure training or non-lethal sports that still develop skill and discipline.

In conclusion, although dangerous activities deliver excitement, I do not favour their widespread pursuit. The likelihood of severe harm, combined with shared social costs, weakens the argument for endorsement. Encouraging safer forms of challenge preserves human wellbeing while still satisfying the desire for achievement.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer takes a clear stand against dangerous sports, then supports it with a vivid example. The point about accidents adds real weight. I am not broadly in favour of encouraging dangerous sportsa minor mechanical failure or sudden weather change can instantly turn recreation into tragedy
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay moves in a clear, logical order and links its ideas well. The connectors below guide the reader from reason to counter-argument to ending. For exampleHoweverA safer alternativeIn conclusioncombined with
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex structures with control. The phrases below add condition and contrast and keep the meaning clear. even when safety rules are followedalthough dangerous activities deliver excitement, I do not favour their widespread pursuit
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe grammar is accurate and controlled. This phrase shows a correct clause built around a condition. When emergency services, insurance pools, and hospitals absorb the consequences
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer picks precise, higher-level words and collocations. The terms below show a broad range. high-risk pursuitsdisproportionate riskpermanent injurysocial responsibility
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including a British form. Both words below are good examples. wellbeingcalculated
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 208 words, within the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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