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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #30573 Cashless Society B1
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In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. Cashless society seems to be a reality, and how realistic do you think it might be? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

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In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. Cashless society seems to be a reality, and how realistic do you think it might be? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
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A cashless society, characterised by widespread credit card and digital payments, is increasingly visible in modern economies. I believe such a transition is largely realistic in urban and developed contexts, although it will remain uneven globally. Its expansion brings notable efficiencies, yet also introduces economic and social risks that require careful management.

One major advantage of a cashless system is convenience and efficiency for consumers and businesses. Electronic transactions are faster, reduce the need to carry physical money, and simplify record keeping. For example, contactless payments allow commuters to move quickly through transport networks, while retailers benefit from reduced handling costs and lower theft.

However, increased reliance on credit cards and digital payments has significant disadvantages. Overspending becomes easier when purchases feel less tangible, contributing to personal debt. Moreover, cashless societies depend heavily on technology, excluding elderly people or those without access to banking services, and leaving economies vulnerable to cybercrime or system failures.

In conclusion, a cashless society is a realistic and growing trend, particularly where infrastructure and digital literacy are strong. While it offers speed, convenience, and economic efficiency, it also risks inequality and financial instability. Therefore, its benefits can be maximised only if inclusive policies and robust security measures accompany the transition.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion that a cashless society is mostly realistic, then supports it well with a real example. The example about commuters shows good detail. I believe such a transition is largely realistic in urban and developed contextscontactless payments allow commuters to move quickly through transport networks
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas move smoothly from one paragraph to the next. The linking words below guide the reader through advantages, disadvantages, and the ending. For exampleHoweverMoreoverIn conclusionTherefore
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease. The phrases below join ideas using contrast and condition, and the meaning stays clear. although it will remain uneven globallyif inclusive policies and robust security measures accompany the transition
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe grammar is accurate and controlled. This phrase shows a correct construction that joins a main idea with a contrast. yet also introduces economic and social risks that require careful management
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses strong academic words and natural collocations. The phrases below are precise and fit the topic well. widespread credit card and digital paymentsreduced handling costsdigital literacyfinancial instability
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including British forms. Both words below are spelled well. characterisedmaximised
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 205 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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