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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #30567 Public Transportation
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You will have 20 minutes to plan, write and revise an essay about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you develop a position, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 200-300 words.

What are the advantages of cheaper public transportation? Give your opinion from your own experience.

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What are the advantages of cheaper public transportation? Give your opinion from your own experience.
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Affordable public transportation offers significant social and economic benefits for cities. By lowering fares, governments can widen access to essential services and encourage more sustainable travel choices. From my experience as a daily commuter, cheaper public transport is not only convenient but also improves urban life overall.

Moreover, the most immediate advantage is increased accessibility and equity. Specifically, lower ticket prices allow students, low-income workers, and older people to travel regularly for education, employment, and healthcare without financial strain. Clearly, in my experience, reduced fares make commuting predictable and affordable, which supports stable attendance at work or study. As a result, labour participation improves and social exclusion is reduced, strengthening the overall economy.

A further benefit is the reduction of traffic congestion and environmental damage. Indeed, when public transport is inexpensive, more people choose buses or trains instead of private cars. I have observed that during discounted fare periods, roads are less crowded and journeys are faster. This shift lowers fuel consumption, cuts air pollution, and decreases carbon emissions, contributing to healthier urban environments and more efficient use of infrastructure.

In conclusion, cheaper public transportation enhances social inclusion, supports economic participation, and promotes environmental sustainability. Furthermore, based on my experience, lower fares encourage consistent use of public services, making cities more liveable and balanced for a wider range of residents.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly praises cheaper transport and adds personal experience. A good example about who can now travel supports the point. cheaper public transport is not only convenient but also improves urban life overalllower ticket prices allow students, low-income workers, and older people to travel regularly
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open each idea and join them together. This makes the essay flow smoothly. MoreoverSpecificallyAs a resultIndeedIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long sentences with joined clauses that stay clear and precise. reduced fares make commuting predictable and affordable, which supports stable attendancewhen public transport is inexpensive, more people choose buses or trains instead of private cars
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence lists several verbs correctly and cleanly. This shift lowers fuel consumption, cuts air pollution, and decreases carbon emissions
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and phrases about transport and society. accessibility and equitylabour participationtraffic congestioncarbon emissions
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct all through, including words like these. sustainableenvironmental
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 220 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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