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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #30562 Language Globalisation B1
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In globalisation, it is impossible to succeed if you cannot speak at least one foreign language. Do you think everyone must learn at least one foreign language?

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In globalisation, it is impossible to succeed if you cannot speak at least one foreign language. Do you think everyone must learn at least one foreign language?
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In an increasingly globalised world, economic and social success is often linked to cross-border communication. In particular, while technology reduces some barriers, I largely agree that learning at least one foreign language is necessary for most people. On the whole, in my opinion, this foreign language requirement is a broad skill expectation rather than an absolute rule.

Moreover, foreign language proficiency expands professional and educational opportunity in a global labour market shaped by globalisation. For instance, employers value workers who can negotiate and build trust across cultures through confident communication and understanding. Furthermore, a manager who speaks another language can handle international clients directly, improving efficiency through smoother interaction. Indeed, this direct communication strengthens both individual careers and the competitiveness of any organisation operating across borders.

Admittedly, some argue that global languages and translation tools make foreign language learning unnecessary in a globalised world. However, these tools cannot fully convey cultural nuance or establish the genuine relations that real understanding requires. Consequently, in diplomacy and service industries, even basic foreign language skills signal respect and support long-term success.

In conclusion, although not everyone requires fluency, learning at least one foreign language is increasingly essential in a globalised society. Ultimately, it enhances communication, employability, and multilingualism, so most people should develop this language skill to succeed in an interconnected world.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly agrees that most people should learn a foreign language. A good example about employers and workers supports this view. I largely agree that learning at least one foreign language is necessary for most peopleemployers value workers who can negotiate and build trust across cultures
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itEach paragraph starts with a clear linking word. This range of connectors keeps the argument easy to follow. In particularMoreoverFurthermoreAdmittedlyConsequently
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer builds long sentences with joined and contrasting clauses that read smoothly. while technology reduces some barriers, I largely agreethese tools cannot fully convey cultural nuance or establish the genuine relations that real understanding requires
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis relative clause is built correctly and is hard to fault. a manager who speaks another language can handle international clients directly
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay shows strong word choices and phrases that suit a global topic. cross-border communicationglobal labour marketcultural nuanceemployability
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout, including British forms like these. globalisedmultilingualism
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 219 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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