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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #30558 Air Quality R1
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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
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In many developing countries, rapid industry expansion and construction have degraded air and water quality, threatening public health. In particular, this pollution is not inevitable, because it reflects weak regulation and limited administrative capacity in each developing country. On the whole, effective prevention requires stronger governance combined with cleaner technology and urban planning that protects the environment.

Moreover, the first measure is that governments should enforce clear emission and effluent standards for every factory and building site. For instance, routine inspection and meaningful penalties make compliance predictable, so an industry invests in filtration and wastewater treatment. Furthermore, requiring covered material transport and on-site sediment traps can sharply reduce the air and water pollution around an expanding country. Indeed, cleaner construction methods protect the local environment while still allowing essential development to proceed responsibly.

Consequently, a second solution depends on enabling cleaner production in industry through incentives and smarter planning. In addition, tax credits and low-interest loans accelerate the adoption of energy-efficient machinery and closed-loop water systems in each factory. Admittedly, at the construction stage, zoning buffers and mandatory environmental impact assessments limit the cumulative pollution that a developing country faces.

In conclusion, declining air and water quality in a developing country can be prevented through firm regulation and cleaner methods. Ultimately, by combining enforcement with incentives and smarter urban design, governments protect the environment and public health without stifling industry.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay explains the causes in the writer's own words and gives clear measures. It supports the point with the example of inspections and penalties that make factories invest in treatment. effective prevention requires stronger governance combined with cleaner technologyroutine inspection and meaningful penalties make compliance predictable, so an industry invests in filtration
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay flows well because each paragraph opens with a clear linker. These devices help the reader follow the ideas smoothly. In particular,Moreover,For instance,Consequently,In conclusion,Ultimately,
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease, joining ideas with subordinate clauses. The reason clause below shows strong control of tricky structures. because it reflects weak regulation and limited administrative capacityat the construction stage, zoning buffers and mandatory environmental impact assessments limit the cumulative pollution
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe essay shows accurate control of complex grammar. This clause of concession is built correctly and reads naturally. while still allowing essential development to proceed responsibly
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise academic words and strong collocations with confidence. These choices sound natural and exact. administrative capacitywastewater treatmentenergy-efficient machineryenvironmental impact assessments
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including British forms. These words are written correctly. governancecumulative
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 230 words, which is within the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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