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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #1534 Geographical Location R1
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Regions and countries' geography situation affect people's behaviour and their success. What is your opinion?

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Regions and countries' geography situation affect people's behaviour and their success. What is your opinion?
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Geographical location of regions and nations can influence how people behave and how successful they become, because the environment shapes daily choices and opportunities. I largely agree that geography exerts a strong influence, although it does not fix outcomes independently of policy and effort.

First, physical conditions such as climate, terrain, and natural resources affect behaviour by encouraging certain livelihoods and skills. Populations in fertile river basins often develop agricultural collaboration and long planning horizons, while coastal societies tend to cultivate trade, navigation, and openness to external ideas. These patterns can translate into economic success when local behaviours align with market demand, as seen where ports attract investment and employment through logistics and services.

Second, geographical connectivity shapes access to institutions, education, and networks that enable achievement. Regions located near economic centres benefit from transport links, knowledge spillovers, and diverse labour markets, whereas remote areas face higher costs and fewer options. Critics argue that individual determination outweighs location, yet even motivated people progress faster when infrastructure, digital access, and public services reduce barriers and reward productive behaviour.

In conclusion, geography influences behaviour and success by structuring incentives, skills, and access, even though it does not determine destiny. Effective governance and personal effort can mitigate disadvantages, but they work most efficiently when geography provides supportive conditions.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay clearly agrees that geography has a strong effect but does not decide everything, and it supports this with an example about ports attracting investment. I largely agree that geography exerts a strong influence, although it does not fix outcomesports attract investment and employment through logistics and services
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses clear ordering words and contrast links to guide the reader through the points. First,Second,whereasCritics argue thatIn conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses concession and contrast clauses with ease, keeping the meaning fully clear. although it does not fix outcomes independently of policy and efforteven though it does not determine destiny
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis complex sentence contrasts two clauses correctly and is hard to fault. Regions located near economic centres benefit from transport links, knowledge spillovers, and diverse labour markets, whereas remote areas face higher costs
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise geography and economy words that suit the topic. terrainfertile river basinsknowledge spilloversinfrastructure
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout the essay. livelihoodsnavigation
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 215 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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