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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #1531 Gender Discrimination R1
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Nowadays the most high-level jobs are done by men. Should jobs be reserved for women by the government? What are the effects of this?

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Nowadays the most high-level jobs are done by men. Should jobs be reserved for women by the government? What are the effects of this?
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Despite progress towards gender equality, senior professional and managerial positions remain dominated by men. This situation has led to debate about whether governments should reserve high-level roles for women and what consequences might follow. Although public intervention can help correct systemic imbalance, permanently reserving jobs by gender is problematic, and its effects depend on whether policies are limited, flexible, and evidence-based.

Well-designed, temporary measures can reduce structural barriers such as discriminatory hiring routines, closed professional networks, and unequal caring responsibilities. For example, time-bound targets in public institutions can expand the leadership pipeline by making female authority more visible and socially accepted. Likely effects include faster improvement in representation, more balanced organisational judgement through diverse perspectives, and a stronger public message that advancement is genuinely attainable for qualified women.

However, rigid reservation of senior posts risks negative outcomes. If appointments appear to prioritise gender over competence, stigma and legal challenges may arise, and organisational performance may suffer. Women selected under inflexible mandates can face unfair doubt about their abilities, while colleagues may perceive the system as unjust. By contrast, policies such as transparent promotion criteria, accessible childcare, and leadership training improve opportunity without excluding capable candidates.

In conclusion, governments should not permanently reserve high-level jobs for women, but they should actively support time-limited corrective strategies. The most positive effects emerge when accountability is combined with capacity building, allowing women's participation to grow sustainably while preserving merit, institutional credibility, and public confidence.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear balanced view that permanent job reservation is problematic, and it supports this with an example about time-bound targets in public bodies. permanently reserving jobs by gender is problematictime-bound targets in public institutions can expand the leadership pipeline
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses clear contrast and example linkers to move between the two sides of the argument. For example,However,By contrast,In conclusion,
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses concession and condition clauses with ease, and the meaning is fully clear. Although public intervention can help correct systemic imbalance, permanently reserving jobs by gender is problematicIf appointments appear to prioritise gender over competence, stigma and legal challenges may arise
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis conditional sentence is built correctly and shows strong control of complex grammar. Women selected under inflexible mandates can face unfair doubt about their abilities
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise workplace and policy words that fit the topic well. systemic imbalanceleadership pipelinetransparent promotion criteriacapacity building
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including British forms. organisationalprioritise
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 240 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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