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Practice Writing: Write Email ID: #50817 Noise and Hot Water core

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You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.

You are renting an apartment, but there are some problems with it. You are writing an email to the building manager/owner to complain that the neighbours are noisy and the hot water system is not well. And it's not the first time that the hot water system is not well. You are writing an email to Marvin, the owner of the building, to solve this problem. You should write between 50 and 120 words.
You should include:
What problems you have encountered;
How you are affected;
How to fix the problems.
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.

* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.

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Sample Answer:

Dear Marvin,

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to address the problems in the building and solve them.

Firstly, focusing on the noisy neighbours, and the hot water system is not well is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.

Secondly, promoting noisy neighbours and problems with hot water system is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons.

Lastly, addressing the problem and fixing it before renting an apartment is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader.

I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.

Kind regards,
John

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Sample Answer

Dear Marvin,

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to address the problems in the building and solve them.

Firstly, focusing on the noisy neighbours, and the hot water system is not well is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.

Secondly, promoting noisy neighbours and problems with hot water system is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons.

Lastly, addressing the problem and fixing it before renting an apartment is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader.

I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.

Kind regards,
John

Student #0401 4 hours ago 113 words 13/15

Dear Marvin, I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to complain about the neighbours are noisy and the hot water system is not well of an apartment. Firstly, focusing on the noisy neighbours is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives. Secondly, promoting hot water system is not well is the critical next step. Such an initiative is important for broadening our horizons. Lastly, addressing to visit in the apartment to fix the problem is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader. I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes. Kind regards, John

Student #3B83 a month ago 108 words 13/15

Dear Marvin, I am writing to complain about two ongoing issues in my apartment. First, my neighbours frequently make excessive noise, especially late at night, which is disturbing my sleep and affecting my daily routine. As I mentioned previously, “the hot water system is not working properly again,” and this has become a recurring problem. I would appreciate it if you could speak to the neighbours about keeping the noise down and arrange for a qualified technician to inspect and permanently repair the hot water system. These problems are seriously affecting my comfort, so I hope they can be resolved as soon as possible. Kind regards, [Your Name]

Student #12BF 4 months ago 110 words 13/15

Dear Marvin, I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to complain that the neighbours are noisy and the hot water system is not well. Firstly, focusing on the what problems you have encountered is pivotal. It necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objective. Secondly, how these problems affect the people from whole building is the critical step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons. Lastly, addressing the solutions to fix the problems is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader. I await insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming those ideas into actionable outcome. Kind regards, John

Student #A314 ⭐ Top 5 months ago 120 words 14/15

Dear Mr Marvin, I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to you to complain about some problems in the building and need to solve these problems. Firstly, focusing on noisy neighbours and hot water system is not working well is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives. Secondly, promoting problems while sleeping because of noise and can't take shower is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons. Lastly, addressing fix the hot water system and change neighbours is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader. I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes. Kind regards, John

Student #E116 11 months ago 118 words 14/15

Dear Marvin, I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to address the problems in the building and solve them. Firstly, focusing on the noisy neighbours, and the hot water system is not well is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives. Secondly, promoting noisy neighbours and problems with hot water system is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons. Lastly, addressing the problem and fixing it before renting an apartment is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader. I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes. Kind regards, John

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