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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #46285
WEM A86
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
The local health authority wants to promote more physical activity among the elderly in your community. You are a member of a local fitness club and you would like to make suggestions to the local health authority. Write an email to Mr Lee, a representative of the local health authority, giving three suggestions for ways to make physical activity more convenient and rewarding for the elderly.
Your ideas must come from the following three themes:
- A fitness fair
- Using local role models
- Incentive programs
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting ideas for your suggestions.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Mr Lee,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to make physical activity more convenient and rewarding for the elderly in our community.
Firstly, focusing on a fitness fair is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting local role models is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing incentive programs is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Mr Lee,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to make physical activity more convenient and rewarding for the elderly in our community.
Firstly, focusing on a fitness fair is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting local role models is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing incentive programs is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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