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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #46276
WEM A77
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
The local sports authority wants to support more participation and diversity in sports among the children in your area. You are a coach at a local sports club and you would like to make suggestions to the local sports authority. Write an email to Mr Brown, a supervisor of the local sports authority, giving three suggestions for ways to make sports more inclusive and enjoyable to the children.
Your ideas must come from the following three themes:
- A sports carnival
- Using local athletes
- After-school programs
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting ideas for your suggestions.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Mr Brown,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to support more participation and diversity in sports among the children in our area.
Firstly, focusing on a sports carnival is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting local athletes is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing after-school programs is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Mr Brown,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to support more participation and diversity in sports among the children in our area.
Firstly, focusing on a sports carnival is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting local athletes is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing after-school programs is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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