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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #46245
WEM A46
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
Your goal as a community health clinic employee is to get more people to get screenings for preventative care. Send an email with three suggestions for improving the uptake of health screenings sent to Dr Edward, the clinic director.
Your suggestions should focus on the following three themes:
- Free screenings are available at a health fair
- Outreach by mobile clinics to underprivileged areas
- Informative lectures about the value of preventative healthcare
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Dr Edward,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to improve the uptake of health screenings.
Firstly, focusing on free screenings available at a health fair is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting mobile clinics to underprivileged areas is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing informative lectures about preventative healthcare is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Dr Edward,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to improve the uptake of health screenings.
Firstly, focusing on free screenings available at a health fair is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting mobile clinics to underprivileged areas is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing informative lectures about preventative healthcare is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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