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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #46205
WEM AL6
You are involved in a student committee at your university that is planning a career fair. Send an email with three suggestions for how to make the next career fair better to Mr Carl, the director of career services.
Your suggestions should focus on the following three themes:
- Panel talks featuring former employees from a range of sectors
- Workshops on resumes and simulated interviews
- Networking acceptance by employers
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Write your email below (between 50 and 120 words)
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Sample Answer:
Dear Mr Carl,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to make the next career fair better.
Firstly, focusing on panel talks featuring former employees is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting workshops on resumes and simulated interviews is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing networking acceptance by employers is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Dear Mr Carl,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to make the next career fair better.
Firstly, focusing on panel talks featuring former employees is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting workshops on resumes and simulated interviews is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing networking acceptance by employers is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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