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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #45445
Healthier Work Environment core
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
Your company has recently announced a new initiative to improve employee well-being. Write an email to your supervisor.
Your suggestions should focus on the following three themes:
- improvement of health
- suggesting three ways to promote a healthier and more balanced work environment
- benefits of health
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Supervisor,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to improve employee well-being.
Firstly, focusing on improvement of health is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting a healthier and more balanced work environment is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing benefits of health is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Supervisor,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to improve employee well-being.
Firstly, focusing on improvement of health is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting a healthier and more balanced work environment is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing benefits of health is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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