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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #45439
Healthier Lifestyles core
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
The local community center is looking to promote healthier lifestyles among residents of all ages. You are an active member of the local fitness club and have some innovative ideas on how to engage more people in regular physical activities. Write a proposal to Mrs Thompson, the director of the community center, offering three suggestions for initiatives that could increase participation in physical activities.
Your suggestions should focus on the following themes:
- A community fitness challenge
- Collaboration with local sports personalities
- Flexible fitness classes for different age groups
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Mrs Thompson,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to increase participation in physical activities.
Firstly, focusing on a community fitness challenge is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting collaboration with local sports personalities is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing flexible fitness classes for different age groups is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Mrs Thompson,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to increase participation in physical activities.
Firstly, focusing on a community fitness challenge is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting collaboration with local sports personalities is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing flexible fitness classes for different age groups is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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