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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #45435
Unable to Attend the Concert core
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
Your favorite band is coming to town, and your friend has gotten tickets for the concert next weekend. However, you have already committed to volunteering at a local charity event on the same day. Write an email to your friend.
Your suggestions should focus on the following three themes:
- explaining why you can't attend the concert
- suggesting a different activity you both could do together
- also make up for it
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Friend,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to explain why I won't join the concert next weekend.
Firstly, focusing on volunteering at local charity event is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to honour my prior obligations.
Secondly, promoting different activity we could enjoy together is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing how I can make up for missing the concert is equally essential. I’d love to treat you to a nice dinner or another event we both enjoy.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Friend,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to explain why I won't join the concert next weekend.
Firstly, focusing on volunteering at local charity event is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to honour my prior obligations.
Secondly, promoting different activity we could enjoy together is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing how I can make up for missing the concert is equally essential. I’d love to treat you to a nice dinner or another event we both enjoy.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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