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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #45428
Boosting Community Fitness Engagement core
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
The community sports center is interested in promoting physical fitness and a healthier lifestyle among the residents of your neighborhood. As a regular participant in the center's activities, you would like to offer suggestions to the community center's management. Write an email to Ms Thompson, a coordinator at the community sports center, providing three suggestions for ways to increase participation in physical fitness programs among residents.
Your suggestions should focus on the following three themes:
- a neighborhood fitness challenge
- partnerships with local businesses
- flexible scheduling for programs
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Ms Thompson,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to increase participation in physical fitness programs among residents.
Firstly, focusing on a neighbourhood fitness challenge is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting partnerships with local businesses is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing flexible scheduling for programs is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Ms Thompson,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to increase participation in physical fitness programs among residents.
Firstly, focusing on a neighbourhood fitness challenge is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting partnerships with local businesses is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing flexible scheduling for programs is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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