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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #45422
Boosting Community Health core
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
Your local health department is launching a campaign to promote healthier lifestyles among the community members. As a health enthusiast and volunteer, you decide to contribute ideas to this initiative. Write an email to Ms Anderson, the director of the Health Promotion Division, suggesting three strategies to enhance the effectiveness of the health campaign.
Your suggestions should focus on the following three themes:
- community fitness events
- nutrition education workshops
- digital health tracking tools
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Ms Anderson,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to enhance the effectiveness of the health campaign.
Firstly, focusing on community fitness events is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting nutrition education workshops is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing digital health tracking tools is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Ms Anderson,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to enhance the effectiveness of the health campaign.
Firstly, focusing on community fitness events is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting nutrition education workshops is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing digital health tracking tools is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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