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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #45417
Building a Safer and More Connected Neighborhood core
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
Your neighbourhood is interested in enhancing safety and fostering a sense of community among its residents. Write a letter to Mr Thompson, the president of the neighbourhood association, proposing three suggestions for initiatives that could improve neighbourhood safety and community spirit.
Your suggestions should focus on the following three themes:
- Community watch programs
- Neighbourhood social events
- Safety awareness workshops
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Mr Thompson,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to propose ways to enhance safety and foster a sense of community among residents.
Firstly, focusing on community watch programs is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting neighbourhood social events is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing safety awareness workshops is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Mr Thompson,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to propose ways to enhance safety and foster a sense of community among residents.
Firstly, focusing on community watch programs is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting neighbourhood social events is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing safety awareness workshops is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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