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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #45409
Community Health Education core
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
The local health clinic is looking to improve health outcomes and wellness in the community. You are a healthcare professional working at the clinic and would like to make suggestions to the clinic's management. Write an email to Dr Martinez, the clinic director, proposing three suggestions for ways to enhance health education and preventative care among the community members.
Your suggestions must focus on the following three themes:
- hosting regular health education workshops
- launching a community health ambassador program
- implementing a mobile clinic to reach underserved areas
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting quotes for your aspects.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Dr Martinez,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to enhance health education and preventative care among the community members.
Firstly, focusing on hosting regular health education workshops is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting a community health ambassador program is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing a mobile clinic to reach underserved areas is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Dr Martinez,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to enhance health education and preventative care among the community members.
Firstly, focusing on hosting regular health education workshops is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting a community health ambassador program is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing a mobile clinic to reach underserved areas is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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