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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #42882
Health programmes
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
Your local hospital is seeking community feedback on their plans to expand mental health services. Write an email to the hospital's community outreach coordinator outlining your support for the expansion and suggesting areas of focus. You should write 80-120 words.
Your ideas must come from the following three themes:
- Importance of expanding mental health services
- Suggestions for specific mental health programmes
- Ideas for community involvement
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting ideas for your suggestions.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Community Outreach Coordinator,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to support the expansion of mental health services.
Firstly, focusing on the importance of expanding mental health services is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting specific mental health programmes is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing community involvement is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Community Outreach Coordinator,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to support the expansion of mental health services.
Firstly, focusing on the importance of expanding mental health services is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting specific mental health programmes is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing community involvement is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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