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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #42562
Living spaces
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
The local animal shelter is looking to improve its facilities to better care for its animals and attract potential adopters. Write an email to the shelter's manager with your suggestions for improvements. You should write 80-120 words.
Your ideas must come from the following three themes:
- Enhancing animal living spaces
- Developing a volunteer program
- Creating an engaging adoption website
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting ideas for your suggestions.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Manager,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to improve our local animal shelter facilities.
Firstly, focusing on enhancing animal living spaces is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting a volunteer program is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing an engaging adoption website is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Manager,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to improve our local animal shelter facilities.
Firstly, focusing on enhancing animal living spaces is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting a volunteer program is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing an engaging adoption website is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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