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Practice Writing: Write Email
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The local hospital is seeking feedback on improving patient care. Write an email to the chief medical officer, Dr Smith, with your suggestions. You should write at least 100 words.
Your ideas must come from the following three themes:
- Patient-staff communication
- Modern medical equipment
- Comfortable facilities
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting ideas for your suggestions.
* Write your email below (between 50 and 120 words)
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Sample Answer:
Dear Dr Smith,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to propose ways to improve patient care.
Firstly, focusing on patient-staff communication is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting modern medical equipment is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing comfortable facilities is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Dear Dr Smith,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to propose ways to improve patient care.
Firstly, focusing on patient-staff communication is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting modern medical equipment is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing comfortable facilities is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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