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Practice Writing: Write Email
ID: #39747
Ergonomic
Instructions
You will have 9 minutes to plan, write and revise an email about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you use email convention, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 80-120 words.
Your company is updating its office space. Write an email to the facilities manager, Ms Rodriguez, with your suggestions. You should write 80-120 words.
Your ideas must come from the following three themes:
- Ergonomic office furniture
- Natural lighting solutions
- Communal workspaces
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting ideas for your suggestions.
* Aim for 80-120 words. Full Form marks for 50-120 words; under 30 or over 140 words scores 0.
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Sample Answer:
Dear Ms Rodriguez,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to update our office space.
Firstly, focusing on ergonomic office furniture is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting natural lighting solutions is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing communal workspaces is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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Sample Answer
Dear Ms Rodriguez,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to suggest ways to update our office space.
Firstly, focusing on ergonomic office furniture is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting natural lighting solutions is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing communal workspaces is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John
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