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Practice Writing: Write Email
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Your workplace is introducing a new performance review system. Write an email to the HR manager, Mr Clark, expressing your thoughts on how it can be effectively implemented. You should write at least 100 words.
Your ideas must come from the following three themes:
- Feedback process
- Goals alignment
- Professional development opportunities
You should include all three themes. Provide supporting ideas for your suggestions.
* Write your email below (between 50 and 120 words)
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Sample Answer:
Dear Mr Clark,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to express my thoughts on how the new performance review system can be effectively implemented.
Firstly, focusing on the feedback process is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting goals alignment is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing professional development opportunities is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John.
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Dear Mr Clark,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to you to express my thoughts on how the new performance review system can be effectively implemented.
Firstly, focusing on the feedback process is pivotal. This necessitates meticulous attention to attain our objectives.
Secondly, promoting goals alignment is the critical next step. Such an initiative is imperative for broadening our horizons and achieving substantial progress in our efforts.
Lastly, addressing professional development opportunities is equally essential. Successfully integrating this will cement our position as a leader and foster an environment conducive to growth.
I await your insights with keen interest, looking forward to transforming these ideas into actionable outcomes.
Kind regards,
John.
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