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Practice Writing: Summarize Written Text ID: #748 Passages Geothermal Energy
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What is the solution for nations with increasing energy demands, hindered by frequent power cuts and an inability to compete in the international oil market? For East Africa at least, experts think geothermal energy is the answer. More promising still, the Kenyan government and international investors seem to be listening.

This is just in time according to many, as claims of an acute energy crisis are afoot due to high oil prices, population spikes and droughts. Geothermal energy works by pumping water into bedrock, where it is heated and returns to the surface as steam which is used directly as a heat source or to drive electricity production.

Currently, over 60% of Kenya’s power comes from hydroelectric sources, but these are proving increasingly unreliable as the issue of seasonal variation is intensified by erratic rain patterns. Alternative energy sources are needed and the leading energy supplier in Kenya, Kenya Electricity Generating Company (KenGen), hopes to expand its geothermal energy supply from 13% to 25 % of its total usage by 2020. Locals have been utilising this resource for centuries using steam vents to create the perfect humidity for greenhouses, or simply to enjoy a swim in the many natural hot lakes.

One area lies next to the extinct Olkaria volcano, within the Hell’s Gate National Park, and sits over some of the thinnest continental crust on Earth. This is a result of the thinning of the crust by tectonic stretching, causing hotter material below the Earth’s surface to rise, resulting in higher temperatures. This thin crust was ideal for the drilling of geothermal wells. Water in the surrounding rocks is converted to steam by the heat. The steam can be used to drive turbines and produce electricity.
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Alternative energy sources are required and the leading energy supplier in Kenya, Kenya Electricity Generating Company, hopes to expand its geothermal energy supply from 13% to 25 % of its total usage by 2020, and locals have been utilising this resource for centuries using steam vents to create the perfect humidity for greenhouses, or simply to enjoy a swim in the many natural hot lakes.
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Sample Answer 1

Alternative energy sources are required and the leading energy supplier in Kenya, Kenya Electricity Generating Company, hopes to expand its geothermal energy supply from 13% to 25 % of its total usage by 2020, and locals have been utilising this resource for centuries using steam vents to create the perfect humidity for greenhouses, or simply to enjoy a swim in the many natural hot lakes.

Sample Answer 2

Geothermal energy is the solution for nations with increasing energy demands, inability in high oil prices and unreliable hydroelectric sources for East Africa, which can be achieved by pumping water into bedrock where heat can convert water to steam which drives turbines and produce electricity at thin crust which is ideal for the drilling of geothermal wells, attracting Kenyan government, Kenya Electricity Generating Company and international investors.

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Alternative energy sources are needed required and the leading energy supplier in Kenya, Kenya Electricity Generating Company (KenGen), hopes to expand its geothermal energy supply from 13% to 25 % of its total usage by 2020, and locals have been utilising this resource for centuries using steam vents to create the perfect humidity for greenhouses, or simply to enjoy a swim in the many natural hot lakes. -> Both sentences talking about geothermal energy. 

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