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Practice Writing: Summarize Written Text ID: #742 School Bullying Project B1
Instructions
Spurred by the sense that disorderly behaviour among students in South Euclid was increasing, the school resource officer (SRO) reviewed data regarding referrals to the principal's office. He found that the high school reported thousands of referrals a year for bullying and that the junior high school had recently experienced a 30 percent increase in bullying referrals. Police data showed that juvenile complaints about disturbances, bullying, and assaults after school hours had increased 90 percent in the past ten years.

The SRO worked in close collaboration with a social worker and the university researcher. They coordinated a Response Planning Team comprising many stakeholders that were intended to respond to each of the areas identified in the initial analysis. Environmental changes included modifying the school schedule and increasing teacher supervision of hotspots. Counsellors and social workers conducted teacher training courses in conflict resolution and bullying prevention. Parent education included mailings with information about bullying, an explanation of the new school policy, and a discussion about what could be done at home to address the problems.

The results from the various responses were dramatic. School suspensions decreased by 40 percent. Bullying incidents dropped 60 percent in the hallways and 80 percent in the gym area. Follow-up surveys indicated that there were positive attitude changes among students about bullying and that more students felt confident that teachers would take action when a problem arose. Teachers indicated that training sessions were helpful and that they were more likely to talk about bullying as a serious issue. Parents responded positively, asking for more information about the problem in future mailings. The overall results suggest that the school environments were not only safer but that early intervention was helping at-risk students succeed in school (South Euclid (Ohio) Police Department, 2001).
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Sample Answer 1

Spurred by the sense that disorderly behaviour among students in South Euclid was increasing, the school resource officer analysed data regarding referrals to the principal's office, and the overall results suggest that the school environments were not only safer; but that early intervention was helping at-risk students succeed in school.

Sample Answer 2

School bullying has increased significantly in the past decade, which urged means of overturning this situation including collaboration of SRO, social workers and researchers, modification of school schedule and strengthening of teachers’ supervision, teacher training courses, parent’s education and student education, and the results showed that the bullying incidents dropped dramatically and parents responded positively.

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Spurred by the sense that disorderly behaviour among students in South Euclid was increasing, the school resource officer (SRO) reviewedanalysed data regarding referrals to the principal's office, and the overall results suggest that the school environments were not only safer; but that early intervention was helping at-risk students succeed in school (South Euclid (Ohio) Police Department, 2001). -> Both sentences talking about data and risks/behaviour

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