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Practice Writing: Summarize Written Text
ID: #5628
Job 3 R1
I got the idea to start Amazon 16 years ago. I came across the fact that web usage was growing at 2,300 percent per year. I'd never seen or heard of anything that grew that fast and the idea of building an online bookshop with millions of titles something that simply couldn't exist in the physical world was very exciting to me. I had just turned 30 years old and I'd been married for a year. I told my wife MacKenzie that I wanted to quit my job and go do this crazy thing that probably wouldn't work since most start-ups don't and I wasn't sure what would happen after that. MacKenzie told me I should go for it.
I was working at a financial firm in New York City with a bunch of very smart people, and I had a brilliant boss that I much admired. I went to my boss and told him I wanted to start a company selling books on the internet. He took me on a long walk in Central Park, listened carefully to me and finally said, 'That sounds like a really good idea but it would be an even better idea for someone who didn't already have a good job.' That logic made some sense to me and he convinced me to think about it for 48 hours before making a final decision.
Seen in that light, it really was a difficult choice but, ultimately, I decided I had to give it a shot. I didn't think I'd regret trying and failing. And I suspected I would always be haunted by a decision to not try at all. After much consideration, I took the less safe path to follow my passion, and I'm proud of that choice.
I was working at a financial firm in New York City with a bunch of very smart people, and I had a brilliant boss that I much admired. I went to my boss and told him I wanted to start a company selling books on the internet. He took me on a long walk in Central Park, listened carefully to me and finally said, 'That sounds like a really good idea but it would be an even better idea for someone who didn't already have a good job.' That logic made some sense to me and he convinced me to think about it for 48 hours before making a final decision.
Seen in that light, it really was a difficult choice but, ultimately, I decided I had to give it a shot. I didn't think I'd regret trying and failing. And I suspected I would always be haunted by a decision to not try at all. After much consideration, I took the less safe path to follow my passion, and I'm proud of that choice.
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Sample Answer 1
He was working at a financial firm in New York City with a bunch of very smart people, and he had a brilliant boss that he much admired, and he'd never seen or heard of anything that expanded that fast and the idea of building an online bookshop with millions of titles something that simply couldn't exist in the physical world was very exciting to him.
Sample Answer 2
When the writer had an idea for an online bookshop that would later become Amazon, with the support of his wife but despite the reluctance of his boss, he decided to take the risky but rewarding decision to go ahead with it, and this is a choice he is still proud of.
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He was working at a financial firm in New York City with a bunch of very smart people, and he had a brilliant boss that he much admired, and he'd never seen or heard of anything that
grewexpanded that fast and the idea of building an online bookshop with millions of titles something that simply couldn't exist in the physical world was very exciting to him.
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