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Practice Writing: Summarize Written Text ID: #544 Beauty Contest in Australia B1
Instructions
Since Australians Jennifer Hawkins and Lauryn Eagle were crowned Miss Universe and Miss Teen International respectively, there has been a dramatic increase in interest in beauty pageants in this country. These wins had also sparked a debate as to whether beauty pageants are just harmless reminders of old fashioned values or a throwback to the days when women were respected for how good they looked. Opponents argue that beauty pageants, whether its Miss Universe or Miss Teen International, are demeaning to women and out of sync with the times. They say they are nothing more than symbols of decline.

In the past few decades, Australia has taken more than a few faltering steps toward treating women with dignity and respect. Young women are being brought up knowing that they can do anything, as shown by inspiring role models in medicine such as 2003 Australian of the Year Professor Fiona Stanley.

In the 1960s and 70s, one of the first acts of the feminist movement was to picket beauty pageants on the premise that the industry promoted the view that it was acceptable to judge women on their appearance. Today many young Australian women are still profoundly uncomfortable with their body image, feeling under all lands of pressures because they are judged by how they look.

Almost all of the pageant victors are wafer thin, reinforcing the message that thin equals beautiful. This ignores the fact that men and women come in all sizes and shapes. In a country where up to 60% of young women are on a diet at any one time, and 70% of school girls say they want to lose weight, although most have a normal BMI, such messages are profoundly hazardous to the mental health of young Australians.
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Sample Answer 1

Since Australians Jennifer Hawkins and Lauryn Eagle were crowned Miss Universe and Miss Teen International respectively, there has been a dramatic increase in interest in beauty pageants in this country, and opponents contend that beauty pageants, whether its Miss Universe or Miss Teen International, are demeaning to women and out of sync with the times.

Sample Answer 2

The wins of two Australian females on beauty pageants increased the interest in Australians and sparked a debate, in which proponents think they are harmless reminders, while opponents argue they are throwbacks and symbols of decline, which are hazardous to women mental health, out of sync with the times and against the steps towards treating women with dignity and respect, judging women on their appearance, demeaning to women, and reinforcing the message prefer thin images.

Explanation

Since Australians Jennifer Hawkins and Lauryn Eagle were crowned Miss Universe and Miss Teen International respectively, there has been a dramatic increase in interest in beauty pageants in this country, and opponents argue contend that beauty pageants, whether its Miss Universe or Miss Teen International, are demeaning to women and out of sync with the times. -> Both sentences are talking about pageants. 

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