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CELPIP Practice Reading: Reading Correspondence ID: #62907 Hard The Notice That Sounds Like Us

Read the following message.

Hi Nisha,

Your draft about bicycles in the entrance includes everything residents need to know, but the opening line may work against us. “Residents continue to ignore the safety rule” makes it sound as though every bicycle was left there carelessly.

Last week I spoke with Theo, whose bike appeared in the entrance twice. The storage-room lock had jammed, and he moved the bike as soon as maintenance opened the door. Another bicycle belonged to a visitor who had followed an outdated sign. Neither case makes the blocked exit acceptable, but both suggest confusion as well as carelessness.

Could we begin with the shared need to keep the exit clear, then explain where bicycles can go when the storage room is unavailable? We should still say that bikes left in the entrance will be moved. A firm consequence is easier to accept when the notice also gives a workable alternative.

I have asked maintenance to remove the old sign and add an after-hours rack location. Once those details are confirmed, your clear diagram will be useful. I am not trying to soften the safety rule. I want the notice to help people follow it before it assumes they chose not to.

Daniel

Using the drop-down menu (▾), choose the best option according to the information given in the message.

Daniel's main concern about the draft is that 1.


Daniel discusses Theo and the visitor 2.


Daniel refuses to weaken 3.


Including an alternative location matters, as 4.


The diagram will be most useful 5.


The main point of Daniel's message is that the notice 6.

Here is a response to the message. Complete the response by filling in the blanks. Select the best choice for each blank from the drop-down menu (▾).

Hi Daniel,

I see why my opening treats different situations as 7.
. Theo’s case does not make the blocked exit safe, but it shows that 8.
.

I will lead with the shared safety goal and include 9.
. We can keep the warning about moving bicycles because a useful alternative makes the consequence 10.
. I will hold the diagram until maintenance 11.
.

Nisha

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