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CELPIP Practice Reading: Reading Correspondence ID: #62892 Hard An Accurate Reference

Read the following message.

Hi Sandeep,

I received the experience summary you would like me to use when the housing agency calls for a reference. I am glad to speak about your work here. You were dependable, and the way you reorganized the volunteer schedule during my medical leave showed initiative when the team needed it.

One phrase in the summary worries me, however. It describes you as the operations manager who supervised six employees. Your official position was program assistant. During my absence, you coordinated shifts for six volunteers, but hiring, performance reviews, and other staff decisions remained with Carla. Calling the volunteers employees also gives the role a meaning it did not have.

I do not think the stronger title is necessary. The agency says it wants someone who can notice a problem and guide people through a solution. Your scheduling example demonstrates exactly that, especially because you consulted the volunteers before changing their shifts. I can explain that you took temporary responsibility beyond your usual duties without suggesting that you held authority you did not have.

Please revise the summary before sending it to the agency. I would be comfortable saying that you were a program assistant who took the lead on volunteer scheduling during my leave. That description is accurate and still shows growth. If the agency asks whether I recommend you, my answer will be yes. I simply need the details supporting that recommendation to match our records.

Regards,
Helen

Using the drop-down menu (▾), choose the best option according to the information given in the message.

Helen's main reason for writing is to 1.


"Supervised six employees" is inaccurate since 2.


Helen mentions the agency's needs mainly to show that 3.


Helen's point about the extra work is that Sandeep 4.


Helen's attitude toward Sandeep is best described as 5.


Helen says her suggested wording 6.

Here is a response to the message. Complete the response by filling in the blanks. Select the best choice for each blank from the drop-down menu (▾).

Hi Helen,

I appreciate your honesty and your willingness to recommend me. I can see that my summary 7.
. I was trying to show that I accepted extra responsibility, but the wording 8.
.

Your suggested description still shows that I 9.
, which is the part most relevant to the agency. I will revise the title and describe the people on the schedule as 10.
. That way, your reference can be supportive while 11.
.

Sandeep

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